THE CROW
A Crow came down the walk.
Yes!!! He was really a crow!!
But when he saw me watching him,
He gave a sudden bow.
Of course he did not do so for respecting,
He was about to pick up in his beak,
A small tube like wormling
I think he wondered who was I,
And I was formed how
But I am sure, although I didn't see it,
" He left with a 'KOW! KOW!' "
-KUBER NAG
Wonderful excellent 👍
ReplyDeleteThank You so much Dadi.
ReplyDeleteExcellent keep it up dear. From Tanusree aunty
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for appreciating
ReplyDeleteWhat a masterpiece , age is just a number indeed . The ending was my favourite part 😍💯
ReplyDeleteVery nice poem Kuber. Biswadeep.
DeleteVery nice poem Kuber. Biswadeep.
ReplyDeleteExcellent .... God bless him in all dimensions..... Tu kai di
ReplyDeleteIt is a very good poem. You are very talented.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written - can see the bird with my mental eye !
ReplyDeleteVery nice Kuber..... Keep it up..... Waiting for the next.
ReplyDeleteVery nice Kuber..... Keep it up..... Waiting for the next.
ReplyDeleteSumita Biswas
Very nice Kuber.... kerp it up dear..😃
ReplyDeleteVery good Kuber , 👏👏
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem! Truly jian has good sense of imagination and I loved his idea! He has put the perspective of animals as to what and how they think of humans ♥️♥️♥️
ReplyDeleteToo good choto. Keep it up
ReplyDeleteThank You so much everyone!!!
ReplyDeleteWell written Kuber....kudos👍... Good use of imagination and well written👌
ReplyDeleteVery good kuber👌👌
ReplyDeleteThis is very nice poem about a crow this vey gorgeous poem
ReplyDeleteKuber
Wow 👏👏
ReplyDeleteWow 👏👏
ReplyDeleteYour encouragement will help me write more. Thanks a lot for your appreciation 😊...
ReplyDeleteKuber my son, you rock 🤩🤩
ReplyDeleteKeep writing. Stay blessed 🧚♂️🧚♂️
Good job Jian
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