THE CROW
A Crow came down the walk.
Yes!!! He was really a crow!!
But when he saw me watching him,
He gave a sudden bow.
Of course he did not do so for respecting,
He was about to pick up in his beak,
A small tube like wormling
I think he wondered who was I,
And I was formed how
But I am sure, although I didn't see it,
Wonderful excellent π
ReplyDeleteThank You so much Dadi.
ReplyDeleteExcellent keep it up dear. From Tanusree aunty
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for appreciating
ReplyDeleteWhat a masterpiece , age is just a number indeed . The ending was my favourite part ππ―
ReplyDeleteVery nice poem Kuber. Biswadeep.
DeleteVery nice poem Kuber. Biswadeep.
ReplyDeleteExcellent .... God bless him in all dimensions..... Tu kai di
ReplyDeleteIt is a very good poem. You are very talented.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written - can see the bird with my mental eye !
ReplyDeleteVery nice Kuber..... Keep it up..... Waiting for the next.
ReplyDeleteVery nice Kuber..... Keep it up..... Waiting for the next.
ReplyDeleteSumita Biswas
Very nice Kuber.... kerp it up dear..π
ReplyDeleteVery good Kuber , ππ
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem! Truly jian has good sense of imagination and I loved his idea! He has put the perspective of animals as to what and how they think of humans ♥️♥️♥️
ReplyDeleteToo good choto. Keep it up
ReplyDeleteThank You so much everyone!!!
ReplyDeleteWell written Kuber....kudosπ... Good use of imagination and well writtenπ
ReplyDeleteVery good kuberππ
ReplyDeleteThis is very nice poem about a crow this vey gorgeous poem
ReplyDeleteKuber
Wow ππ
ReplyDeleteWow ππ
ReplyDeleteYour encouragement will help me write more. Thanks a lot for your appreciation π...
ReplyDeleteKuber my son, you rock π€©π€©
ReplyDeleteKeep writing. Stay blessed π§♂️π§♂️
Good job Jian
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